Rhythmic and Metric

What if the Sun Vanished Now?

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What would transpire were the Sun to vanish, d’you know?
Think you and they and I would be after?
What might occur if the Moon hoed own row?

Time determines all the seasons that go.
Were the Sun now ceased, would Moon come this near?
What would transpire were the Sun to vanish, d’you know?
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Change is constant; that the Sun sees below.
But the Moon, it’s said, results in strange fear.
What might occur if the Moon hoed own row?

Planets move around the Sun, they lay low;
And around which force the Sun goes isn’t clear.
What would transpire were the Sun to vanish, d’you know?
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Prayers offered to the Moon make life glow;
D’you think there is something this Moon does bear?
What might occur if the Moon hoed own row?

Moon that’s featured on the night sky doesn’t grow,
But results in motions of the seas here.
What would transpire were the Sun to vanish, d’you know?
What might occur if the Moon hoed own row?
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Suvidha Agarwal
Suvidha Agarwal
1 month ago

Very informative & awesome writeup

B Sudharsan
Reply to  Suvidha Agarwal
1 month ago

Thanks a lot!

Suchismita Patro
Suchismita Patro
1 month ago

Well written

B Sudharsan
Reply to  Suchismita Patro
1 month ago

Thank you!

Cedric Noronha
Cedric Noronha
1 month ago

Very good post. You have penned down a nice poem. Keep up the good work.

B Sudharsan
Reply to  Cedric Noronha
1 month ago

Thanks a ton!

James
James
1 month ago

What a wonderful poem!

B Sudharsan
Reply to  James
1 month ago

Thank you!

Roshan
Roshan
1 month ago

Amazing!

B Sudharsan
Reply to  Roshan
1 month ago

Thanks, Roshan!

Balaji
Balaji
1 month ago

Nice.

B Sudharsan
Reply to  Balaji
1 month ago

Thanks, dad!

B Sudharsan
Reply to  Balaji
1 month ago

Thank you, Dad!

Subodh Rajak
Subodh Rajak
1 month ago

Wow!! great, really splendid !!

B Sudharsan
Reply to  Subodh Rajak
1 month ago

Thanks a lot!

Senyah
Senyah
1 month ago

Really nice

B Sudharsan
Reply to  Senyah
1 month ago

Thank you!

Entertainment
Entertainment
1 month ago

Really amazing

Godwin Nwaobasi
Godwin Nwaobasi
1 month ago

The sun should better not thanks for the lesson

Subodh Rajak
Subodh Rajak
1 month ago

Very nice !!

Zisan
Zisan
1 month ago

Awesome

Balaji
Balaji
1 month ago

Nice.

B Sudharsan
Reply to  Balaji
1 month ago

Thank you, Dad!

B Sudharsan
Reply to  Balaji
1 month ago

Thanks, dad!

Senyah
Senyah
1 month ago

Really nice

B Sudharsan
Reply to  Senyah
1 month ago

Thank you!

James
James
1 month ago

What a wonderful poem!

Subodh Rajak
Subodh Rajak
1 month ago

Very nice !!

Godwin Nwaobasi
Godwin Nwaobasi
1 month ago

The sun should better not thanks for the lesson

Zisan
Zisan
1 month ago

Awesome

Entertainment
Entertainment
1 month ago

Really amazing

Suvidha Agarwal
Suvidha Agarwal
1 month ago

Very informative & awesome writeup

Suchismita Patro
Suchismita Patro
1 month ago

Well written

B Sudharsan
Reply to  Suchismita Patro
1 month ago

Thank you!

Cedric Noronha
Cedric Noronha
1 month ago

Very good post. You have penned down a nice poem. Keep up the good work.

Subodh Rajak
Subodh Rajak
1 month ago

Wow!! great, really splendid !!

B Sudharsan
Reply to  Subodh Rajak
1 month ago

Thanks a lot!

Roshan
Roshan
1 month ago

Amazing!