Rhythmic and Metric

What Love Made Me

Who I in truth esteemed thou asked me then;
Except my God revered none I did say.
Soon dolesome grew thou like a pig in pen;
What self did was lose not just night but day.

When spluttered thou hard did not self take heed?
Remember this self calmed thy nerves quite soon.
In thy book you thought this self had no need;
But love suppressed made self a wholesome goon.
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Thou still stand pat, beseeching self to go;
Am fogy say thou hither and yon now?
In God I trust, so His foe is my foe.
But He dotes on all, so may down I bow?

Idea fogy thou might think God is.
Might I make known He is my only bliss?
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Opestimulus
1 month ago

Good write up

Pramod jangid
1 month ago

Excellent

SIDDHARTH VAMSI
SIDDHARTH VAMSI
1 month ago

Wow nice

Cedric Noronha
Cedric Noronha
1 month ago

Very good post. You have penned down a beautiful sonnet. Keep up the good work.

Balaji
Balaji
1 month ago

Good work. Keep it up

Raj
Raj
1 month ago

Great post!

Malachi
1 month ago

Amazing keep it up

Malachi
1 month ago

Amazing keep it up

B Sudharsan
Reply to  Malachi
1 month ago

Thank you, my dear friend.

Raj
Raj
1 month ago

Great post!

B Sudharsan
Reply to  Raj
1 month ago

Thanks a ton!

Balaji
Balaji
1 month ago

Good work. Keep it up

B Sudharsan
Reply to  Balaji
1 month ago

Thank you very much, dad! 😊

Pramod jangid
1 month ago

Excellent

B Sudharsan
Reply to  Pramod jangid
1 month ago

Thanks a ton, my friend.

Cedric Noronha
Cedric Noronha
1 month ago

Very good post. You have penned down a beautiful sonnet. Keep up the good work.

B Sudharsan
Reply to  Cedric Noronha
1 month ago

Thanks for the comment, my friend.

Opestimulus
1 month ago

Good write up

B Sudharsan
Reply to  Opestimulus
1 month ago

Thanks a lot!

SIDDHARTH VAMSI
SIDDHARTH VAMSI
1 month ago

Wow nice

B Sudharsan
Reply to  SIDDHARTH VAMSI
1 month ago

Thanks a lot!

fortunegabriel
fortunegabriel
1 month ago

This is nice though I didn’t really understand it

B Sudharsan
Reply to  fortunegabriel
1 month ago

I see. You might understand if you read it again. 😁

Suchlife
Suchlife
1 month ago

Nice one

B Sudharsan
Reply to  Suchlife
1 month ago

Thanks!

Balaji
Balaji
1 month ago

Good work. Keep it up

B Sudharsan
Reply to  Balaji
1 month ago

Thank you very much, dad! &#128522

Opestimulus
1 month ago

Good write up

B Sudharsan
Reply to  Opestimulus
1 month ago

Thanks a lot!

Raj
Raj
1 month ago

Great post!

B Sudharsan
Reply to  Raj
1 month ago

Thanks a ton!

Malachi
1 month ago

Amazing keep it up

B Sudharsan
Reply to  Malachi
1 month ago

Thank you, my dear friend.

Cedric Noronha
Cedric Noronha
1 month ago

Very good post. You have penned down a beautiful sonnet. Keep up the good work.

B Sudharsan
Reply to  Cedric Noronha
1 month ago

Thanks for the comment, my friend.

Pramod jangid
1 month ago

Excellent

B Sudharsan
Reply to  Pramod jangid
1 month ago

Thanks a ton, my friend.

SIDDHARTH VAMSI
SIDDHARTH VAMSI
1 month ago

Wow nice

B Sudharsan
Reply to  SIDDHARTH VAMSI
1 month ago

Thanks a lot!

fortunegabriel
fortunegabriel
1 month ago

This is nice though I didn’t really understand it

B Sudharsan
Reply to  fortunegabriel
1 month ago

I see. You might understand if you read it again. 😁

Suchlife
Suchlife
1 month ago

Nice one

B Sudharsan
Reply to  Suchlife
1 month ago

Thanks!

fortunegabriel
fortunegabriel
1 month ago

This is nice though I didn’t really understand it.